Awakening

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    Awakening

    life is a dream that no one seems to understand
    even the life they hold in their hands
    trying to make so many people realize
    everything they were taught were lies
    the precious things in life are so faraway
    stranded inside they fall to their grave
    lost illusions become a reality
    like the puppet never to be free
    trapped forever in fear
    never sheding a tear
    can someone awaken from this nightmare

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    Tempestlady commented on Awakening

    06-21-2009

    Loved it. I would have put the word me before nightmare. Obviously feeling betrayed because life is not all it's made out to be. Loved the meter, and rhyme. The message is all to familiar to me. Write on.....

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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