We Lost it Didn't We?

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    We Lost it Didn't We?
    There was a time when we couldn't wait to be together
    There was a time when we couldn't wait to hold each other
    There was a time when I loved you and you loved me
    But I found my heart broken and yours Unspoken
    I gave you all my love, You gave me all your excuses
    I gave you children and you gave me silence
    I gave you freedom and you gave me an ultimatum
    Your time was never my time and my time was spent-
    Waiting for you to love me, Waiting on you to want me, Waiting on you to need me. Now, As I pick up the pieces of my life, so much time wasted...I can't tell today from tomorrow and tomorrow from yesterday, and finally from out of the darkness and into the light I have come to realize, We lost it didn't We? Time, Faith, Love and Hope- As with any bad bet, lost it all didn't we!

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on We Lost it Didn't We?

    12-29-2010

    I like this poem, I can so relate to this poem. I have been their with someone waiting to love me, but they never did. I love this poem, it is going into my favorites because if you had not worte it, I might have thought it was written to me:) I love it.
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    chauhanlm

    12/29/2010

    BH09-Thankyou, so very much, As I swollow my pride and have been reading through these poems for months, You are one of my favorite Poets for your words make you think and feel. I love your poetry and want to Thank you for sharing your life and opening up, I hope to be as strong as you some day, but for now I'm practicing not crying myself to sleep. I THINK YOUR WONDERFUL and BRAVE!!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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