We can't forget about forever

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    For my love I won't forget my I do was forever

    We can't forget about forever

    we kissed, we hugged, we made love
    we made plans, we had dreams, we had children
    we had everything

    then everything changed
    was it me or was it you
    no time for me and I had no time for you
    love that was there no has no space
    for you or me

    you are busy I am busy
    soon we forget who's who
    I cook you clean I wash the kids
    you clean the dishes

    your wishes are no longer my command
    no we pass by each other deadpan
    no emotion devotion for each other things seem to have changed

    Do you still love me?
    Do I still love you?
    Of course now we just have to make time for our dreams to come true

    Let's walk and talk again
    remember who we were before
    you are beautiful and sublime
    I just have to take time

    Our five kids our blessings
    but so are you and I treasure the blessing that you are
    Our I do was forever

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    danmartyjake1 commented on We can't forget about forever

    09-02-2009

    This was lovely and deeply expressed prose. I myself and so many others understand these feelings...it will help to write it out, too. Good Work!

    dumplin commented on We can't forget about forever

    08-27-2009

    I wish EVERY man felt this way about marriage. There wouldn't be any divorce. Just a couple of spelling errors and the flow was a little difficult, but other than that, I loved it!

    Mrpoetry commented on We can't forget about forever

    08-24-2009

    to re-ignite your love start with Jesus He will do it because He loves you and your family. Jesus is the glue, use It

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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