we are not any more...!

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    we are not any more...!

    Once we were friends, we were lovers,
    I was afraid of this thing called love,
    But you were there to guide me,
    You knew me well, you knew deep within my heart.
    The first time we touched, you touched my heart, my soul,
    I saw love, tender in your eyes,
    Behind high walls i was hide,
    But you found me.
    Now I'm all alone in an empty room, feel cold & sad,
    I'm wondering how could you do this to me,
    How could you leave without a word...!
    I'm asking myself, was it real love?
    I know i loved you then, & i love you now, as i will always do. I feel weak as i miss your touch,
    I'm lost without you in my world,
    But now, i know one thing for real...
    WE WERE LOVERS, BUT NOW, WE ARE NOT ANY MORE...!

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    Musicmynded1 commented on we are not any more...!

    10-07-2010

    Great roundabout on the piece.. i like when works give a roundabout.

    Totsa

    10/07/2010

    love is all about roundabout !!! now u r happily in love the next second u r deeply hurt n then all changes again...till god knows when

    Utopia666999 commented on we are not any more...!

    03-27-2009

    i like this poem, happened to me and it hurts; love i think is always real just not always right.

    Totsa

    10/01/2010

    totally agree :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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