Falling...!

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    Falling...!
    I'm falling into you, trying hard to stop it,

    But all i can do is just keep on falling,

    It's like I'm in darkness & you are the light,

    But I'm afraid to reach you,

    Afraid to touch you, while I'm longing to,

    I keep on dreaming of the day i can be with you,

    So my soul can be naked in front of you,

    I'm missing you each second passing by,

    Trying not to show, but my eyes cannot lie,

    I'm screaming silently for you to hold me in your arms,

    Shedding my tears at night, waiting for you to wipe it away,

    Waiting & waiting to kiss my pain goodbye,

    But it seems my lover that I'm kissing you goodbye...!

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Falling...!

    10-07-2010

    This is a real nice deep piece to me... imma haveta check out more of ur stuff.
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    Totsa

    10/07/2010

    thxx a lot music,,, i'm gonna check urs too :)

    Heartbeat44 commented on Falling...!

    10-20-2009

    Your poems remind me so much of me,it is incredible. I often feel that I have given up on love,but your poems remind me that love is a force we cannot deny,or ignore. When I read your poems ,they put me right back to where I was when I was feeling the same way.I remember the path that once led me to those feelings, it was a wonderful path,a wonderful journey. A journey with no regrets, well,maybe a little,as it is said, "s#*t happens" A wonderful poem with beautiful expression,well written!
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    Totsa

    10/07/2010

    thxxxx heartbeat44 & yes love is a journey that can never be regretted even wz it's heartaches

    Nev commented on Falling...!

    04-16-2009

    I feel for you, I am going through this now and I feel your pain. I couldn't have written the feelings better.
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    Totsa

    04/07/2011

    thanks so much & sorry for ur pain.. but we have to live with it for sometime...

    CdeM commented on Falling...!

    04-16-2009

    extremely powerful in its intent alone... There would be one thing I could see missing, the descriptor of that who it is you are falling away from, or into...
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    Heartbeat44

    10/20/2009

    I feel the intensity of the poem as it is.It is a message for whom she dangerously desires. A mystery to us ,and to her,possibly everything.

    Totsa

    04/07/2011

    thanks CdeM :))

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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