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    WAR

    Sand covered ground
    Blood covered fields
    We struggle to stay alive
    Always alert to our surroundings
    No time to rest our eyes or minds
    We stand together
    In defense of one another
    In a land that is not our own
    The battle grows around us
    Some of us will fall to the enemies blow
    None of us will ever be the same
    The horrors of this day will remain with us always
    Our souls stained by our actions
    Those who say " War is Hell "
    Knew what they were talking about
    War will be the end of all who take part

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    Plot121 commented on WAR

    11-21-2008

    I liked this poem for the most part the description was good and the message was realistic and very well made. Keep up the good work Plot121

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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