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  • Lost Love

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     Paradise is lost and we are now two
    Because I gave my rib for you
    Love so tender, quiet and caring
    What lies before us is quite daring

    God made me for you and you for me
    But our fate has been so sad and blue
    We neeed to ask do we really care?
    Please answer me don't just stare

    A life together but lacking love
    Is like the morning without doves
    No sunsets seen because of rain
    Can't stay together there's too much pain

    There's no telling what is really the truth
    We talk, hold hands things go smooth
    We had the chance of a life together
    That life no longer will be forever

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    inkmaster commented on Untitled

    12-06-2009

    Sad but a real nice write.It flows fell and rolls nice.I liked it Inkmaster
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    animal

    06/23/2011

    Thank you for your nice comment, I write as I feel, sometimes it is a day or week or even months before I get the urge.

    Teardrops commented on Untitled

    12-06-2009

    How ture you start out in love then the years and kids seem to part you in some way wonderful poem, really liked it
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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