Hello Someone

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    Hello Someone

     Hello someone, just know I am here
    Hello someone, hear me far and near
    Hello someone, I know you're there
    Hello someone, I know you care

    Days and nights go slowly by
    Even nights and days I cry
    Everything I do and say
    Won't stop you from leaving today

    Heartfelt love is hard to find
    I give all of my love it's so kind
    In these days i sit and pray
    I know we'll meet another day

    Parting was at least not tragic
    If nothing else it was magic
    I want you to feel this feeling
    I pray and I am kneeling 

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    dvtdorm commented on Hello Someone

    12-06-2011

    You can feel the pain and loss with each word as you read this poem. I like how it ends with the hope of love and learning. Very nice write. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
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    animal

    12/07/2011

    Thank you for your input, God Bless.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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