a bad turn of cards

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a bad turn of cards



killing time
sitting here in my room
where nothing, is
more important than:
(turning over a red eight)

killing time
thinking of you
longing to be with you
silent; lonely
(the black nine stares back)

there is no killing time
this lonely, lonely time
is only killing me:
my mind demands to be;
left alone

(the game ends
the red eight is buried;
separated
from the black nine)
just as i am from you

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redbloodink commented on a bad turn of cards

01-26-2010

wow how a card game can take us places that make us feel different emotion...... I think this write is powerful and great.... red

teasasue commented on a bad turn of cards

08-23-2009

this is a good poem and you know from you words what you are feeling thank you for sharing

orangepony commented on a bad turn of cards

08-09-2009

wow,diffrent point of view,thought of sadness,great job

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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The Way Out! 9
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Falling 8
a bad turn of cards 5
Edgar Martinez Goes to Cooperstown 11
A Baseball Glove 15
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BROUGHT TO YOU BY... 12
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