Untitled 1

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  • Jealousy
    • sjlove
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    Untitled 1

    every day I think of you
    every night I dream of you
    every second of the day
    I wish you were here to stay

    at dusk I breathe in so deep
    at dawn I wish you were mine to keep
    I see you smiling and laughing with her
    as I intuit while I weep and burn

    maybe one day I'll see you again
    and have that same bright day in the rain
    I'll once say, "hello, again"
    and maybe you'll say, "hello, my friend"

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    slohan4u commented on Untitled 1

    11-25-2009

    expresses your hurt feelings. thanks for writing and sharing.

    Drivingczar commented on Untitled 1

    04-09-2009

    Love verses! Loves paths!

    Drivingczar commented on Untitled 1

    04-09-2009

    Love verses! Loves paths!

    omseattle commented on Untitled 1

    02-20-2009

    great , when we miss someone so badly,

    butterfly62463 commented on Untitled 1

    02-14-2009

    Excellent

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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