Lull

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  • Deception
    • sjlove
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    Lull

    I see you beside me

    and it's only a dream

    There you go elsewhere

    and now it's reality

     

    In my eyes I see only you

    Inside my soul

    Where'd you go

     

    Camouflaged in love

    Where do I stand

    Somewhere in an illusion

    I cannot mend

     

    There's a ticker that empowers me to exist

    Contiguous once

    and there; was a purpose

     

    Stumble and fall

    In disarray

    You left me there

    Still I'm waiting

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    GUSTY commented on Lull

    01-03-2011

    THIS IS A LOVELY WORK; I LOVE IT 'COS I SHARE THE PAINS! BEAUTIFUL!!!

    angelchaser commented on Lull

    08-30-2010

    This is a beautiful poem, sj. One can feel so easily the pain of which you write. May you never know hurt like that again. *hugs*

    Phoenix9 commented on Lull

    07-26-2009

    very deep and a great use of words that flow with a sadness you are feeling

    sjlove

    07/26/2009

    thank you.. appreciate the comment.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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