Unconditional

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Unconditional

I hate the way you look at me; I hate the way you stare

But I love when I am close to you; I love the feeling we share

I hate the way you treat me, I feel the pain inside

But I love the way we’re meant to be, I love when we coincide

I hate the way you talk to me; you make me feel so low

I love it when you show you love, so much you will never know

I hate the way you make me feel, it hurts more because you don’t care

I love the way you my best friend, I love how we’re a pair

It hurts me when I think of you, and all the hurt you cause

If this is what you’re aiming for, then let my cries be your applause

I can’t sleep at night, because you stay on my mind

But I don’t regret anything, never once thought to rewind

I wish that you would realize, I do have feelings to

And all I really want, is just to be with you

I take all your shit, and push it to the side

I try to be strong, not once have you seen me hide

No matter how bad you treat me, I will still be here

Giving you my love, even if you don’t care

I am committed, to giving you my all

I’m mixed up like a puzzle and I’m still trying to solve

I’m trying to see if all of this is really worth the stress

You sit back and laugh at me, while I am giving it my best

Because I want it to work, I will do what it takes

I will give it all, I will take any stakes

All I’m asking of you, is to show me you care

And that our love is unconditional, and you will always be there

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Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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