My greatest Fall

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Sadly True, She turned out to be a bad person, so that is how she was forgotten.....

My greatest Fall

It seems like yesterday, I stood tall and Bold
It's funny how one persons words, can make you feel so cold
No more can I smile, and feel happiness at heart
All that's on my mind is how we fell apart
I thought our bond was strong, but to you it was a game
It hurts how you did me wrong, I just can't thing of you the same
I gave you my all, and always answered to your commands
If you ever needed a friend, I was the first to offer my hand
I don't think I can find another, and let them in my life
Because my love to you was true, and now it's pain inside
you played your cards right, I thought your feelings were real
all our time together, all the happiness you made me feel
now I feel the hurt, all the joy i felt is lost
you've darken my whole world, and turned my summers to frost
I myself am lost, I can only quiver and hide
All on my own, with rivers from my eyes
I sit back and reminisce, about you and all your lies
The more I think about you, the more I hate and despise
I know it's hard, but I will get u off my mind
because the more I hold on, the more I die inside

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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