Give me a try..

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I have to say, the girl i wrote this for... really broke my heart, I wrote this at the begining of our relationship, and i wrote my hate ones after, if you read my stuff you will see what i'm talking about, i hope you enjoy, and thank you for taking the time to read this

Give me a try..

As I sit here and reminisce, the thought of you comes to mind
It feels though I have been blessed, to have you in my life
But ohh what I would do if I could call you my own
It makes me the happiest man, with just that thought alone
I know I must be patient because all real things take time
But I think we should face it, you are meant to be mine
Tell me when you think of me, do I bring a smile to your face?
Tell me if you lost me could I be replaced?
And if I left would I just be a memory inside
Or it be the reason you cry every night
Girl I want you to trust me, I want you to care
I want you to love me, I want to be there
I want to be the one who you can cry to and hold
I want to be the one who can take you to that zone
I want you to believe that I will never cause you harm
I'm begging you to just let me in your arms
You say you're scared if we try, we might have arguments and fits
But I don't want to be the one standing there, asking myself what if
If we never try we will never know what could have been
And that would tear me up inside and leave me in ruins
I'm not rushing things; I'm just letting you know how I feel
And if you walk away you'll break a heart that can't heal
When I feel times are rough, I think of you and I smile
Everything turns to ease, and I know you're worth my while
I have given you my heart, I have given your my trust
And it's your choice to accept or brush it off like dust
And if you find someone, who you think will be a better man
Just let me know and I will completely understand
I'd rather you be happy wit him, than be miserable with me
I wish you would give me a try so I can make you see
I will be dedicated, make you priority number one
If you give me this chance, then I see good things to come
Because I won't mislead you, and I'm not spitting words
I'm spilling my heart to you, and asking if I'm being heard
I know your not looking, but I think I found perfection
And all I want to do with you, is show you my love and affection
I'm not telling you I want you now, I still want us to stay steady
I'm telling you I want you bad, but only when you think your ready
When I touch your hand, and when I hold you close
I feel my spirit lift, and I don't think you oppose
What I'm trying to say is that I need u in my life
And if you happen to approve I know I'll treat you right
Now you know how I feel, but I am moving at your pace
I can wait forever, for that girl who can't be replaced…

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