Unbridled

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This is the eternal romantic in me. I should have been born in the time when knights and lords and ladies represented a finer period of humanity --- or was it just my imagination??

Unbridled

 

From the mountains to the sea, unbridled he must be,

No stall or barn or saddle will you find.

This is a Man of mystery, knighted sword in secrecy,

From days of old, with the angels, next in line.

 

“Man in Black” he is in season; understanding humble reason,

He vanquishes dark foes, both left and right.

So give this Knight his space, to deliver love with grace,

His steed carries him with swiftness through the night.

 

His passion never rests, for he's on a worthy quest,

As he rides on direct orders from the King.

Lords and Ladies gaily cheer, for his Brave Heart knows no fear,

As he soars up snow capped mountains with great speed.

 

A white Knight is hard to find, and you might just lose your mind,

If you wonder where he might have gone today?

One day he will not roam, but in time, he will come home

To a warm barn filled with sweet feed and soft hay.

 

But until that day, my friend, know he’s in it till the end

Since before time, he was in it from the start.

So cheer him from the side, and know that when he rides,

You, my damsel, ride within his heart.

 

 

 

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gogant commented on Unbridled

07-10-2010

Ahhhh, those knights of olde......how impressive do they ride, and the maiden fair, who long for them, can only dream for the day to come when brave hearts meet and repose........................gogant

texaswriter

07/11/2010

That's a whole 'nuther masterpiece! Keep writing!

DrewMcNee commented on Unbridled

07-09-2010

The image of knights in days of old, were never such as has been told, but you tell true and speak of shire, and their fealty will long inspire, so sing such tales and more than this, we bide our time await more bliss.

texaswriter

07/10/2010

Wow! It is in here, at the originalpoetry.com site, that I truly feel like an artist! Thank you for seeing what I saw when I wrote it and appreciating the genre! texasearthangel (texaswriter)

texaswriter

07/10/2010

That was a beautiful comment! I feel so honored to be here!

dahlusion commented on Unbridled

07-09-2010

Castles, lords and ladies, knights in full glory, I am swept back to my childhood fantasies: His passion never rests, for he's on a worthy quest, As he rides on direct orders from the King"—the loyalty was commendable! This is a Royal Write in all of its Knightly glory. Bravo!!!

texaswriter

07/10/2010

I am truly humbled and ecstatic at your review! texasearthangel (writer)

castlemist commented on Unbridled

07-09-2010

I really like this texas...I like stories of knights in shining armour and the good guy saving the day..about all I've read my adult life is Louis L'amou...good write

texaswriter

07/09/2010

I should have been born in the Renissance period. I love the way that men were gallant and spontaneous and their ladies understood and accepted them. Thanks!!!!! Jackie

ApaqRasgirl commented on Unbridled

07-07-2010

Wow! I loved this poem. a great write that flowed so well all the way to the end. Oh if we could all have our white night when we needed him. terrific piece, thanks for shaing. love Asha

texaswriter

07/08/2010

Thank you. That was written for a fellow whom I knew two years ago. It was the story of his life. Thanks.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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