True emotions

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    my first published poem

    True emotions

     Love at first sight/ It feels so right/ A true love/ Written in the stars above/ Our love, never to fade/ For you, I was made/ The walls fall/ To surrender all/ A kiss/ The bliss/ We took a chance/ And found romance/ A deep emotion/ Of love and devotion/ What we share/ Nothing will ever compare/ You carry me away/ With what you say/ I give you my heart/ And hope to never part/ I love you/ I really truly do/ Forever, we'll stay/ I could never walk away/

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    FranzJ commented on True emotions

    03-13-2010

    a love poem that is a good one - and all true if its right
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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