last in the race

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    last in the race

     needin a place/where i'm not last in da race/always gettin left behind/no1 seems kind/feelin astray/losin my way/no1 seems 2 understand/tryin 2 understand/lookin 4 a friend/alone,in da end/gettin used/emotionally abused/da distance/n da circumstance/i get kicked down/walkin with a frown/feelin i am 2 blame/simply so much shame/so much left unspoken/my life is truly broken/dimmed,darken soul/losin control/gettin pushed aside/no place 2 confide/every1 turns away/why is all i can say/no place 2 belong/everythin goes wrong/loneliness/emptiness/driftin,sinkin/why is what i'm thinkin/does any1 care/nothin seems fair/why does it have 2 b/doesnt any1 c/dreams 2 hold/but every1's so cold/wishin 4 more/shut,is every door/i cry at night/simply wonderin why/my tear stained pillow/so much i allow/not sure why thats true/just somethin i do/i need 2 take a stand/when i reach 4 a hand/unanswered it goes,they just turn away/i guess,this is how its goin 2 stay/i need 2 find a place/where i'm not last in da race

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    redbloodink commented on last in the race

    06-01-2010

    Some may see this as defeat... some may see this as a cry for pitty.... some may see this in ways you will not understand..... But let me say Jesus (God) well see this as a cry out to Him and Him alone....... I almost stopped reading it after a few lines but some thing made me go on... So as I read I realized I have felt like this before......... With a write like this I see a spark of hope a longing to be touched by Him..... keep asking keep calling and just maybe He will come find you as He did me....... It will never be easy but it sure feels good to love and be loved as well as you are by Jesus(God Himself) be blessed and walk on...... red
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