TORN

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  • tdizzle
  • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

TORN

TORN

 

TORN BETWEEN OLD AND NEW

THE ONE THAT YOU LOVE DISRESPECTS YOU

SOMEONE NEW WORSHIPS YOU.

TORN BETWEEN OLD AND NEW.

THE ONE YOU LOVE HURTS YOU.

THE ONE THAT YOU WANT CARRESSES YOU.

TORN BETWEEN OLD AND NEW

THE ONE YOU KNOW HATES YOU

THE ONE YOUR STUDING IS IN TO YOU

TORN BETWEEN OLD AND NEW

THE ONE YOU CHARISH DON’T WANT YOU

SOMEONE NEW ADORES YOU.

TORN BETWEEN OLD AND NEW

THE OLD JUST HATES YOU

THE NEW IS IN LOVE WITH YOU..

 

 

                                      3/2007

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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LONG AGO. 0
MY WORLD 1
MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU 0
MY BABY! 0
LONG TIME NOW 0
MY 0
NEVER REALLY KNEW 0
RUIEND 0
SAILING ALONE 1
SOMEONE 0
SORRY IS SO MUCH 0
SPECIAL LOVE 0
SPREAD MY WINGS. 0
FOR THE LONGEST TIME 0
THE SUN WAS SHINNING 0
THE WIND THE NIGHT 0
THE WORLD 0
THE YEARS 0
THE YEARS 0
THINKING OF YOU 0
THOUGHT 0
THROUGH 0
WHat happened 0
TINY LITTLE!!! 0
TORN 0
TRYING TO HELP 0
WATCH 0
WHAT ARE 0
WHAT HAPPENED 0
WHAT HAPPENS???? 0
WHEN I 0
WHEN YOU 0
YOU CALLED ME 0
YOU WANT TO BE FRINEDS 0
YOU SAY!! 0
YOU WANT 0
YOU WOULD 0
YOU’RE A DRUNK!!!! 0
YOUR 0
FOR YEARS NOW 0
FIRST 0
FEAR 0
DROWNING 0
DREAM LOVE 0
DON’T WANT!!!! 0
DON’T KNOW 0
DID YOU EVER?? 0
BROKEN 0
BECAUSE OF YOU 0
ANGRY 0
ALL GROWN UP 0
ALL BECAUSE OF YOU 0
A STRANGER 0
MATHEW 0
FORGIVE AND FORGET 0
to whom it may concern: 0
FOR YEARS 0