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    • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

    FIRST

    FIRST

     

    WHEN I FIRST MET YOU

    I LOOKED INTO YOUR EYES

    WHEN I FIRST MET YOU

    I SAW TRUTH

    WHEN I FIRST MET YOU

    I SAW LOILATY

    WHEN I FIRST MET YOU

    I NEVER KNEW

    I WOULD FEAR THE STRANGER IN YOU

    WHEN I FIRST MET YOU.

    I THOUGHT I REALLY NEW YOU

    AS THE YEARS GREW

    I SAW A REAL DIFFERENCE IN YOU

    FROM WHEN I FIRST MET YOU.

     

     

    JANUARY 2006

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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    LONG AGO. 0
    MY WORLD 1
    MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU 0
    MY BABY! 0
    LONG TIME NOW 0
    MY 0
    NEVER REALLY KNEW 0
    RUIEND 0
    SAILING ALONE 1
    SOMEONE 0
    SORRY IS SO MUCH 0
    SPECIAL LOVE 0
    SPREAD MY WINGS. 0
    FOR THE LONGEST TIME 0
    THE SUN WAS SHINNING 0
    THE WIND THE NIGHT 0
    THE WORLD 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THINKING OF YOU 0
    THOUGHT 0
    THROUGH 0
    WHat happened 0
    TINY LITTLE!!! 0
    TORN 0
    TRYING TO HELP 0
    WATCH 0
    WHAT ARE 0
    WHAT HAPPENED 0
    WHAT HAPPENS???? 0
    WHEN I 0
    WHEN YOU 0
    YOU CALLED ME 0
    YOU WANT TO BE FRINEDS 0
    YOU SAY!! 0
    YOU WANT 0
    YOU WOULD 0
    YOU’RE A DRUNK!!!! 0
    YOUR 0
    FOR YEARS NOW 0
    FIRST 0
    FEAR 0
    DROWNING 0
    DREAM LOVE 0
    DON’T WANT!!!! 0
    DON’T KNOW 0
    DID YOU EVER?? 0
    BROKEN 0
    BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    ANGRY 0
    ALL GROWN UP 0
    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    A STRANGER 0
    MATHEW 0
    FORGIVE AND FORGET 0
    to whom it may concern: 0
    FOR YEARS 0