MY WORLD

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    • tdizzle
    • hey guys I posted some of my poems please read them and tell me what you think about them

    MY WORLD

    MY WORLD

     

    MY WORLD WAS FALLING APART

    WISH I HAD YOU FROM THE START

    MY HEART WAS BROKEN AND BLUE

    UNTILL I FOUND YOU

    NOW MY DREAMS HAVE COME TRUE

    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU

    I WAS READY FOR A FRESH START

    READY TO MEND A BROKEN HEART

    NOW I CAN BEGIN TO LOVE AGAIN

    BECAUSE YOU LOVE ME TRULY AND DEEPLY

    AS I SIT AND THINK OF YOU

    MY HEART FILLS WITH WARN THOUGHTS

    MY HEART IS WHOLE AGAIN.

    MY WORLD IS STARTING TO FIT TOGETHER

    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU.

     

     

    JULY 21 2010

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    8ineffable8 commented on MY WORLD

    10-26-2013

    You have some good ideas. It was a bit too rhymey at the beginning in my opinion

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    tdizzle’s Poems (57)

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    LONG AGO. 0
    MY WORLD 1
    MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU 0
    MY BABY! 0
    LONG TIME NOW 0
    MY 0
    NEVER REALLY KNEW 0
    RUIEND 0
    SAILING ALONE 1
    SOMEONE 0
    SORRY IS SO MUCH 0
    SPECIAL LOVE 0
    SPREAD MY WINGS. 0
    FOR THE LONGEST TIME 0
    THE SUN WAS SHINNING 0
    THE WIND THE NIGHT 0
    THE WORLD 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THE YEARS 0
    THINKING OF YOU 0
    THOUGHT 0
    THROUGH 0
    WHat happened 0
    TINY LITTLE!!! 0
    TORN 0
    TRYING TO HELP 0
    WATCH 0
    WHAT ARE 0
    WHAT HAPPENED 0
    WHAT HAPPENS???? 0
    WHEN I 0
    WHEN YOU 0
    YOU CALLED ME 0
    YOU WANT TO BE FRINEDS 0
    YOU SAY!! 0
    YOU WANT 0
    YOU WOULD 0
    YOU’RE A DRUNK!!!! 0
    YOUR 0
    FOR YEARS NOW 0
    FIRST 0
    FEAR 0
    DROWNING 0
    DREAM LOVE 0
    DON’T WANT!!!! 0
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    BROKEN 0
    BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    ANGRY 0
    ALL GROWN UP 0
    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU 0
    A STRANGER 0
    MATHEW 0
    FORGIVE AND FORGET 0
    to whom it may concern: 0
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