Together

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    Together
    Kisses rain upon my skin
    making it sting with a fire of its own
    Your whispered words make me feel like a queen
    Skin brushes skin
    touches are exchanged
    your lips and mine merge as one
    Our bodies joined together in a dance as old as time.

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    KingHostile commented on Together

    12-12-2009

    Beautiful, tingling images, light the anticipation "feeling that"
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    kittylilly commented on Together

    10-25-2009

    not lose that loving passional writing, not let now one knock u around about ur writing and injoy life as much u can, i know i been there and it take for long time to start wrting again so not let anyone hurt u anyway u can keep this advise or kick it it is up to u, but i thought would like to hear it from a tracher soul, so have a beautful life of writing and anything u choice to do with your life, blessed be
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    kittylilly commented on Together

    10-25-2009

    I agree with icicle113, it is very beautiful, i know that a love poem can be so hear felt like that, it a 10
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    icicle113 commented on Together

    06-20-2009

    OMG SOOOO BEAUTIFUL WOW IT'S WOW... I'M CRYING IT'S SOO PRETTY BUT IM A VERY EMOTIONAL PERSON WELL KEEP THAT UP AND U'LL MAKE IT TO THE TOP IN NO TIME.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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