:: Together ::

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    By: Lyllie LapDance -- pen names I'm flowing and constantly changing Date: 8-19-08

    :: Together ::

    All the strands of time

    run together

     

    all the stars in the universe

    shine together

     

    all the chi in the world

    flows together

     

    all the clouds in the sky

    float together

     

    all the plants in the dirt

    grow together

     

    all the fish in the sea

    swim together

     

    all the circuits in the computer

    work together

     

    and us....

    we just....

    go together.

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    Photographer77 commented on :: Together ::

    06-28-2012

    I love your poem, its just really clear and when I read it, I had a smile :)
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    windsongs commented on :: Together ::

    06-27-2012

    like the current-lol-chi-lifeforce , energy, inside well being-u got it! nice write!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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