To Dad with Love

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    To Dad with Love

    Up I did grow

    On the pious lap of you

    Little finger of yours,

    The first walker of mine

     

    The first step with you

    Made me feel ruling the realm

    I felt so secured

    With the comfort of your clasp

     

    At the time I grieve

    You lent me your touch

    That made of me

    A pleasant kid on terrain

     

    The mischief of mine,

    The cause of your frown

    So made of me

    Never be the same

     

    The triumph of mine

    Though a trivial one

    Fetched blossom on your face

    So as the sun at the day break

     

    My biggest failure

    Never made you bewail

    Your pat on my back,    

    Made a robust man of me

     

    The teacher in you

    Taught me way of life

    You’re my mentor

    To lead me aiming the pinnacle

     

    Steering me to a vibrant path

    Makes the best guide of you

    It’s up to me now

    To be the paramount

     

    I tried in vain

    To impersonate you

    My dear Father

    I envy you, for I’m not you


    I admired you through

    For the sturdy stance of you

    The rousing persona of you

    Made a proud lad of me

     

    I couldn’t thank you enough

    For your abiding gift

    Merely the best of me

    To be my gratitude to you

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    ShanneN commented on To Dad with Love

    08-02-2010

    this was amazing. really, a great write. i grew up, and still am growing up looking up to my father and the greatest man alive. great job!

    cliftondurant commented on To Dad with Love

    07-17-2009

    yes it good to have a strong father figure in our life it's very important good job

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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