Tinge of your love

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    Tinge of your love
    This one encounter
    Was on my mind
    As the sun traveled the sky
    The sheets of dark
    Comfort the shells of our souls
    I could almost taste your touch
    A tinge of love
    Tainted my heart
    The sun is up again
    And I feel it even deeper
    The beautiful cut in my heart
    It is permanent now
    Mind-blowing stain of madness
    It's all I can feel now
    Your touch
    Your love
    Dancing razor in my heart

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    kdarcy commented on Tinge of your love

    07-19-2010

    I enjoyed the read, some great lines in there, the end summed it all up, love always leaves a scar or a guilty reminder. Nice write, I also like the cut in the heart line.
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    dahlusion commented on Tinge of your love

    05-01-2009

    "The beautiful cut in my heart"—— one of the most brilliantly poetic lines of all times!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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