This life

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    This life

    I’d like to tell a story
    About a man who lived in hell
    He left in quite a hurry
    So his story is left for me to tell
    I met this man when I was young
    I knew him very well
    He gave his heart to no one
    He kept himself in a shell
    No one seemed to really care
    That he was very lonely
    And often very scared
    He was thrown out of here
    And thrown out of there
    All because he had long red hair
    He knew he had rights
    But still he stayed out of sight
    Because for his freedom
    He was forced to fight
    Some called him a freak
    But I knew him as Wheat
    The drugs in his veins
    Almost drove him insane
    He took a wrong turn I’m sorry to say
    And now he no longer looks back
    They say he will burn but he already has
    No more suffering now will he learn
    He’s starting a new life
    With a bright new light
    He no longer lives in hell
    His next story I hope
    Will be one well to tell

    for Stephen F Wheatley
    This is a poem I wrote for my older brother who killed himself at the age of 23

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    Clementinewoods commented on This life

    06-04-2009

    This poem is sad and heart-breaking. Regardless of the amount of time, that may have passed, since this incident occurred, I feel that you are a mighty strong person to be able to write and post such a family tragedy. GOD BLESS!!!

    Richisfun commented on This life

    06-03-2009

    Wow ! u see u got me again! i love it, this kind of honest meaningful poem, story, you are a good writer and passionate, 2 most important things to have ... Passion with Gradualness

    MsKrystle commented on This life

    06-03-2009

    Oh, this is so sad (a good poem, but sad) The fact that it was about your brother makes it more than just a poem. Its real.

    ladypoet commented on This life

    06-02-2009

    Very deep. God bless you and your family ma. I know you loved him dearly. Thanks for sharing, I know many can relate... -Lady P.

    kdavidscott1 commented on This life

    05-18-2009

    I am sorry to hear about your brother committed suicide. This is a very nice poem to dedicate. KD

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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