This Heart Of Mine

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    I wrote this song for my good friend jasmine, who was born with a bad heart. Though till this day, she remains strong and continues to live and flourish everyday! This song is for you jasmine!

    peace and love,

    andrew neal

    This Heart Of Mine

     This heart of mine
    Weve been through the hard times
    We both know weve been there before
    Through that same open door

    This heart of mine
    You keep my soul in bind
    How you always keep me going
    And keep my life ever flowing

    This heart of mine
    Give me a life-line
    I'll hold you close by my side
    Nothing can ever divide, us

    This heart of mine
    Weve lived on a thin line
    But no matter where i may be
    You'll always be with me

    Whenever i need you to
    Whenever i call
    You will be there
    You will be there, be there for me

    Whenever i have this feeling
    Whenever i can't go on
    You will be there
    You will be there, be there for me

    This heart of mine
    Please give me a sign
    While you continue to beat away
    It makes me stronger everyday

    This heart of mine
    Weve been through the hard times
    We both know weve been there before
    Through that same open door

    This heart of mine....
    This heart of mine....
    This heart of mine....
    This heart of mine....

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    Rayen commented on This Heart Of Mine

    06-17-2009

    that is a pretty song my name is also Jasmine it means flower which stands for Rayen in Indian (Native American)...so i i can say i have 2 names.lol
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    godfatherguy88

    06/18/2009

    oh sweet. well its nice to meet you jasmine! :)

    sk8ergirl commented on This Heart Of Mine

    06-17-2009

    beautiful and shows a tremendous deal of feelings in it. loved it
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    godfatherguy88

    06/17/2009

    thank you sk8tr girl!!! ill read and comment your work too when i can! peace!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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