Every time I Look In Your Eyes

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    For all those elderly people who has lost someone dear to them. Or to anyone at all who has lost someone. This is for you!

    peace and love,

    andrew neal

    Every time I Look In Your Eyes

     Every time i look in your eyes
    I see our life together passing by
    How will it all end?
    And just what lies around the bend?
    I wanna know
    Where will we go?

    Every time i look in your eyes
    It feels as though ive just died
    Cause i just cant live without you
    When all is said and done what will i do?
    I wanna know
    Where will we go?

    Though it may seem we are getting older
    We'll always be young at heart while were together
    And though the nights may seem to be getting colder
    Don't forget we have each other, now until forever

    Every time i look in your eyes
    I can see past your disquise
    I know somethings wrong, though you wont tell me
    Oh why cant things be like they used to be?
    I wanna know
    I wanna know
    Where will we go?

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    laydbak1 commented on Every time I Look In Your Eyes

    06-20-2009

    I sense a bit of over and back feelings in this one... On the one hand, a picture of uncertainty about the relationship is painted, i.e., where it is going... Then before you close, you insert how you two are always young at heart when you are together, and add to that, for her to not forget you still have each other now, until forever... Those don't sound like guarantees in this context but, I do sense overall what you were trying to say with this... A good write, still....
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