THIS GIRL

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    THIS GIRL

    she caught my eye
    like the sparkle of a first tear drop
    when she spoke and said''hello''
    my heart raced then stopped
    i approached her to say''hey''
    but she started to giggle
    i dont know if it was good or bad
    so i began to giggle
    so we laugh
    and both shared love starrs
    looking deep itno her eyes
    seemed so precious and rare
    she have eyes of amazement
    eyes you love to adore
    their so beautiful and dreamy
    its hard to ignore
    her smile is what i love
    like grandma's cooking on sunday
    i can be mad and ready to explode
    she can calm me down any day
    the way i feel for her
    no girl can compare
    anything i want or need
    she will be there
    through thick or thin
    sleet or rain
    her love for me
    take away all pain
    she help me open up
    and just let my love unfurl
    all because of
    ''THIS GIRL''

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    Alliyahj3 commented on THIS GIRL

    06-23-2009

    This one is good. i like it because it is simple but deep. not many people can get in touch with that side of them self any more........ : )

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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