CONFUSED

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    CONFUSED
    IM SO CONFUSE
    I DNT KNO WAT TO DO
    SHE LOVES MEH ALOT
    ISZ HA LOVIN TRUE
    IM LOVIN DHA SINGLE LIFE
    BUT I WNA B WIT HA 2NITE
    DNT KNO WATSZ RITE
    MAN..IM HIGHER DEN A KITE
    WISHN DHA DECISION WASZ EASY
    BT IDK WAT PLEASE MEH
    TO SEE MII BY HA SIDE
    OR MEH INDA STREETS GETTIN HIGH
    BT I DNT WNA B ALONE ALL MII LIFE
    SO SHE I PICK HA AND MAKE HA MII WIFE
    SHE MAKE ALL MII GRAY SKIES BLUE
    AND MAKE MEH FEEL LYK A NEW DUDE
    EVEN WEN IM RUDE
    BT DAMN...IM CONFUSED

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    frankson03 commented on CONFUSED

    04-21-2009

    i feel you homie, a shawty can do that to you. take it as God tryin to chane sumthin i your life. you goin down a worng road, and he put this gurl in your site. ask yourself, do you want your man controlling you, or your women, who has nothing but good intension for you, other than gettin smacked..? streets are cold, and will always be. try playin the love game instead of the gang bang. but all in all good poem, and keep writing.. (KW)
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