THE WEB

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  • Seducing Passionate Trap
    • DANi89Rose
    • Cool, Calm, Collective & Alwayz Chillin'

    Poem Commentary

    This poem is obviously bout a guy likenedto a spider. How it makes this beautiful masterpiece that is attracted to or mistakenly caught in, and different spiders have different vibration patterns (which i likened to a man's personality in the poem) and the spider paralyzes the prey with venom and the insides are liquefied for digestion. In this case the spider (or man) was somewhat welcomed with out any struggle. Cus u kno how some of u guys be, hypnotizing n preyin on girls lol jp 8)

    THE WEB

    Attracted by the definitive silky web
    I am entangled.
    It's structure so brilliant in design
    I am mesmerized and victimized.
    It absorbs all momentum and energy.
    It's impossible to break from it's seducement.
    Trapped in it's captivating formation I wait intently for your arrival.
    You're Here!
    I can feel your elaborate vibrations flow across my
    delicate physique.
    Acute Precise Penetration
    You inject your sweet smelling venom.
    Paralyzed and helpless, I am at peace.
    My heart is liquefied.
    You suck the life right out of me.
    Forever empty I remain.

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    heartmindsoul commented on THE WEB

    08-03-2009

    very well done with great imagination ( love it )
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    DANi89Rose

    08/03/2009

    thanks for the comment n the rating

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