Floating or Falling?

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    • DANi89Rose
    • Cool, Calm, Collective & Alwayz Chillin'

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    This poem is mainly about how poeple go through heartache and dissapointment, etc in their lives and they finally reach a point where they just want to leave it behind and get the strength to start new and fresh but something always brings them down again. My poem takes the path of a autumn leaf how it falls off a tree and the wind may carry it for a point and it feels relieved so to speak as if it doesn't have to hold on to that tree anymore and can just let go and be free, but at some point it always has to fall to the ground.

    Floating or Falling?

    Like a gentle autumn breeze against a tired leaf, I'm free.
    Free to go where ever the wind takes me.
    At last, it's finally my time to give it all up and just let go.
    Let Go of the pain , the pressure, the past.

    The Pain that rips me apart and never forgives.
    The Pressure that crushes me and never eases up.
    The Past that consumes me and continues to remind me that I could never give up.

    I never have to look back again.
    New Feelings will heal me.
    New Inspirations will encourage me.
    New Adventures will open a new passageway for brand new memories.

    I'm ready for anything
    ...but nothing could prepare me for this moment...

    To feel the ground.


                                                       -Dani89Rose-

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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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