Flaming Love

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  • Love

    Flaming Love

    Your Love is like a flame
    that burns continuously.
    You tell me you love me,
    then do something beautiful and spontaneously.
    Our Love flows
    Like a raging ocean it will never stop.
    Our love is so powerful it can make the strongest mountains rock.
    Our Love is pure
    Like a rare, African blood diamond.
    We're burning up and nothing could cool us off.
    Our flames will never burn out.
    We leave the rain in a state of drought.
    Our Love will always remain.
    Continue to lite the flame.

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    phatdaddee commented on Flaming Love

    10-27-2009

    Good job I really enjoyed your "Flaming Love"! Thanks for sharing!

    WordChallenged commented on Flaming Love

    08-10-2009

    I like the imagery and the comparison of love to fire. Check out my reference to fire in my poem called moments of heat!

    DANi89Rose

    08/10/2009

    Yea thanks, n i read moments of heat I really liked it.

    EL26 commented on Flaming Love

    08-04-2009

    amazing very detailed and the amount of similes you used really got ur point across on this topic

    DANi89Rose

    08/04/2009

    tank u berry much

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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