The Waya

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The Waya

Loud deep-sounding calls raised in pale moonlight
Soft-pawed,they slink over frozen rivers
Velvet furred,on silent feet weaving between frozen pines
Sleeping aginst the cold wood,a large buck
Loud deep-sounding calls it plae moonlight
Over frozen river,through quiet forest
A chorus of voices raised in victory

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kpeery09 commented on The Waya

02-10-2010

Very Nice, I like it, keep up the good work. I like the last line that you put in there. I give you 10

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

BearWalker’s Poems (9)

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