the takeover

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    the takeover

    I was inspired to change my life around
    It seems that being happy each day is much better than being down
    April 10, 2007 is the day i start living like it's my last
    It's going to be hard but today is the day i leave all my stress and pain in the past
    I no it's been long over due for the take over and it's just right
    You my friend have given me a new perspective on life
    Cause i don't need any drugs u are my medication
    Just thinking of you is like meditating
    I put the blunt down I'm out of the rotation
    Living each day is my new dedication
    You have given me the strength to take over my mind, body, and soul
    Before we met everything was wrong i hated my life and i felt like i was going to explode
    The love you give to me is life changing
    It has turned my life upside down and it feel so amazing
    You make me feel reborn
    You give me everything i need to take over my heart and to heal where it was torn

    he is the reason i can enjoy life so i must give thanks to the LORD!!



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    dumplin commented on the takeover

    04-18-2010

    Being the spelling, grammar and punctuation freak that I am, I'd just like to make one suggestion: Perhaps you shouldn't use chatroom abbreviated typing in your poetry. Just a suggestion. Great poem, though! Loved it!
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    inspiredbyluv

    04/18/2010

    what was abbreviated??

    lonewolf162 commented on the takeover

    04-18-2010

    wow iam happy for you my friend iam always b=here for you if u need me im a better friend than a enemy
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    inspiredbyluv

    04/18/2010

    thanx alot....

    warsaw commented on the takeover

    06-17-2009

    I read sooo much more into this work that you've created and I feel you.... I feel you... and it's the right thing that you did, you are a strong person, born with a fierce destiny, you must continue to inspire and express that thing that God has given you, I connect with it and with you, may God bless everything that your hands touch, Sincerely Warsae
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    mdpoetgirl commented on the takeover

    06-03-2009

    Awesome, luv... God took over your life and now you're free... that's so inspiring and such a blessing... your testimony in prose. Great that you shared the healing power of God with all of us on a personal level.
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    dovesofpeace commented on the takeover

    05-29-2009

    Wonderful poem, Praise God and amen! All things are possible with God! God has changed my life as well.
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    inspiredbyluv

    05/29/2009

    thank you... And may God keep on blessing you.. He's the only person that will always be here for us!!!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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