Give God Some Love

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Give God Some Love

Why do we need someone to love us?
What's the reason for giving all our love and trust?
Just to find out the one you believed in
Was all about himself and living in sin
He laid down with different woman and wanted to keep you as his own
Five years of your life was around this man so how could you have not known?
Was the suspicion always there
Or did you try to deny it because you really cared
People lie like they telling the truth
It's as easy as not feeling any pain when pulling out an tooth
What we don't want to hear is that it's only one love out here that's unconditional
There's only one love good for your mind, body and soul
And thats the love of the lord Jesus Christ
There's nothing that could go wrong with him in your life
He deserves that love and trust you so easily give away
So that you may follow his will and way 

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Mandi commented on Give God Some Love

04-18-2010

I hate being right refering to your previous oiece it is a good thing you have th is outlet to vent

rougepriest commented on Give God Some Love

11-10-2009

using the third person to speak is tricky and not good for poems, who are you talking to and where are the metaphors? and the meter and syllable count is all over the place and uneven, this is a narrative of sorts more than a poem. try using some metaphors example love like what when speaking about jesus love?denied the truth like how, in other words make comparisons. like jesus loves us like a father loves his children etc.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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