The Salvation.

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    The Salvation.

    You
    You were there to crush my dreams.
    You were there to hear my screams.
    Yet some how I
    Still fell in love with you.

    You
    You were there to make me cry.
    You were there to say good-bye.
    You
    You were there to break me down.
    You were there but never around.
    Yet some how I
    Still fell in love with you

    You
    You were there to make me fall.
    You were there to consume it all.
    But the salvation I found
    Was always in you.

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    lonewolf commented on The Salvation.

    03-17-2009

    absolutely fantastic poem. Sweet, I love the emotions you put into all your poems. Wish you would write and post more often.

    magati commented on The Salvation.

    02-16-2009

    now you r growing in words and reaching deeper...keep going..just around the corner you will find it....good piece

    KJULEST commented on The Salvation.

    02-04-2009

    Nice work Sweet. I hope one day you will no longer be hurt by him...

    beautifuldeath commented on The Salvation.

    01-30-2009

    this has always been one of my favorites. love you

    Vincent commented on The Salvation.

    01-22-2009

    (GP) smiles Vincent

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    SweetAddiction’s Poems (7)

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