Heartbroken

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    Heartbroken

    You know how much i care about you.
    Yet you don't seem to care.
    You told me you would never leave me.
    We need to take a break is all i ever hear.

    A silent tear ran down my face, no more warm embrace.
    My broken heart lies in thousands of tiny pieces
    With no hopes of being mended.
    I thought you loved me.

    Thats where everything went wrong.
    I believed your narcissistic lies. I never should have fallen for you.
    I can't believe i let you walk all over me.
    The pain you have caused me is surreal.

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    Keifer commented on Heartbroken

    06-08-2009

    I can totally relate. Thank you, K Confessions This is more for you than me, although you probably don’t see it. Make no mistake; I will get something out of it. You need to quit lying to me, your friends, your family, and yourself. Believe me the truth will set you free. Here’s what I want. (You will have to figure out what everyone else’s lies are) I already believe the worst in all of these lies, so any deception here would be quite stupid. This last Saturday you went to the ‘chili cook off’. Tell the truth, you drank, you stayed out late, and you lied. I think you met your boyfriend there and went to the back seat of the car, text messaging me on the way that you where home. The truth is that even if you were with your friends while texting, you were lying to me while you were lying to your friends. Thursday, you went to taste the chili. Did you really? Rendezvous? Using chili as an excuse to meet up with the boyfriend? Which one? Tell me the truth, what really happened?

    xxlheart commented on Heartbroken

    03-24-2009

    this is well written...for the amount of pain you are revealing in this piece your words are not harsh, showing your love still exists. excellent write. i truly adore heart felt poetry.

    dahlusion commented on Heartbroken

    02-08-2009

    This piece is truly a gem in all of its emotional passion.

    lonewolf commented on Heartbroken

    02-01-2009

    Emily, the way you laid out your emotions for everyone to see is wonderful. I love reading your poems. You are truly giftd. I'm definately a fan. Keep writing.

    KJULEST commented on Heartbroken

    01-31-2009

    keep up the great work...

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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