The Rain

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    The Rain

    Wet, cold, chilly
    somewhat refreshing
    and a bit scary

    Loaded raindrops cool my dry scalp
    while little puddles of drizzle
    soak my expensive shirt

    The sky turns a dark grey
    and the wind becomes thick
    the sound of falling water
    becomes the clatter of the moment

    Silence and sadness
    fills the atmosphere
    as the casket is set
    to rest

    Why does it always rain
    when someone close to you
    departs this life?

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    cynthiakehl commented on The Rain

    05-13-2009

    very nice work.

    drewking commented on The Rain

    03-25-2009

    very well put,, easily felt..

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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