The Rain

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    The Rain

    Please explain to me why the rain,

    comes down so constantly,

    and why my heart beats less and less,

    cause shes not here with me,

    and why am i feeling empty,

    and why am i feeling so sad,

    and why does the rain keep pouring,

    wheres the love that i had,

    and why is it that this pain,

    doesnt go away,

    and why is it each time i speak,

    i have nothing much to say,

    and why am i feeling so cold

    and why am i running out of air,

    and why is it each time i close my eyes,

    i shed so many tears,

    and why do my tears of rain,

    form in2 a river,

    and why is it i keep drowning,

    trying to get near her?

    From the raging tides i let out my hand

    so she could save me

    but she wouldnt dare

    her pride was there

    as i sink down the river aimlessly

    im convinced that love does not exist

    and neither should i

    so with one last breath

    i blow her a kiss

    and tell my love:

    goodbye

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    nbosko commented on The Rain

    02-18-2009

    This was a very good poem. I hope it is not about your wife.

    Goliath

    07/30/2009

    no it wasnt because i dont have one lol..was kind of about my ex but i really took my inspiration from the rain pouring heavily one day and i felt it was a reflection of the ending of a relationship

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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