My Lil Heaven

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    My Lil Heaven
    I wake up
    and cast beside me
    laying wistfully breathing..
    rests a sleeping beauty.
    I could never fathom such a magnificent moment.
    4 she is all that is, and all that i've ever wanted...
    and i laugh 2 myself
    in jest,
    because God has blessed
    me with one of his finest angels;
    a gem one of a kind,
    reality becomes sublime,
    and in her i finally find,
    what i've been searching 4 all my life...
    she is my soulmate, my 4ever, my eternity
    she is my wife

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    Stormy commented on My Lil Heaven

    02-20-2009

    I know you're trying for some kind of effect, but 2 and 4 are not words. They are numbers. Sorry, but I really hate to see stuff like this in poetry.
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    nbosko commented on My Lil Heaven

    02-18-2009

    I hope she knows how lucky she is. I wrote a poem for my husband as well. Did you get a chance to read it?
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    Goliath

    07/30/2009

    she is actually a person i met in my dreams..i had a beautiful dream where i found a high school sweetheart, married her..and started a life together with her..the dream was so magically intense, that the whole day i would keep sleeping just so i could get back to the dream!lol but to no avail. which poem was it that was about your husband the knight in shining armor one, i really liked that one i thought it paralleled mines.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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