The Promise

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  • Forgiveness

    The Promise
    I'm writing you this love letter to let you know I'm sorry,
    for the bullshit that I started, it wasn't even funny.

    I'm going to get the help I need,
    but I need the help from you too.

    Until I see the doctor,
    please help me get out of my bad moods.

    I will do the same for you,
    if you really want me to.

    I really love you a lot baby,
    so I'm going to make you a promise.

    I promise you from here on out,
    I'll be a better lover.

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    BTurner commented on The Promise

    09-07-2009

    Well I hope that promise is fufilled. Too many promises in my life had been broken, so I believe in promises like the Tooth Fairy or Fairy Godmothers.
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    KimberlyMock commented on The Promise

    12-05-2008

    I enjoyed the poem Thank you
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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