the pain of leaving you

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    the pain of leaving you

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    The pain of leavin u jus kills my spirit
    my mind says that i should leave
    but my heart just wont hear it
    this situation has my head cloudy
    ...I have yet to find a way to clear it
    they say its easy to leave the one you love 
    but that pain is too strong and i just can bare it
    it is hard to just leave you 
    nd never even luk back.
    it seems that everytime i try.
    my whole world falls off track.
    his eyes would put me n a daze.
    in which became a luv trap
    nd as i try to excape.
    my lungs begin to slowly collapse.
    as if i was drownin or havin sum sort of asthma attack.
    tremblin n confusion nd pain
    as my tears drip down my face.
    jus as april has its rain.
    i begin to feel silly.no.crazy..or maybe..alil insane.
    i  try to gather my thoutghts.
    which is always a hard task to do.
    nd jus to think we go thru this ova nd ova again.
    nd everytime i come bak to u.
    u say u cant breathe without me.
    which my heart translates to i cant live without u.
    but your actions tell me a whole other story.
    and that story ends with you telling me your through
    while my mind is thinkin.i dont need u.
    i can do bad with nd without u.
    i cant eat without u he says.
    nd n my mind i say u can jus starve.
    now im here wishin i still had my premature heart 
    n which ur name i have yet to carve.

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    Ryshell commented on the pain of leaving you

    07-08-2009

    ~This is outstanding!!!~ U realli made it believable

    Pape commented on the pain of leaving you

    06-24-2009

    The last line is the bread and butter of the whole poem. At times some of the middle fluff was redundant but every so often you have these insightful/unforgetable sentences that I won't forget. Nice, very Nice.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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