The most valuable possession

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    The most valuable possession

    So over come with emotion
    My devotion

    Just gained an Exponent
    Time slows so, that it seems years till the next moment.

    Something so wonderful, can't be real
    All wounds Heel, by the bliss it makes me feel.

    So scary is this, feeling, from the fear of losing it,
    I would deserve well, to burn in hell, from even a thought of abusing it

    Misusing it would be a sin, that would rival blasphemy,
    I feel as tho I have reached the highest joys life has for me.

    A picture is a thousand words, but still I would need a Thousand photo's
    To explain how blessed I am, I posses something that will bring me no lows.

    Just Peaks, and Booms, a steady climb towards heavenly pleasure,
    The wealth is with out measure, for the man that merely holds a map to this treasure.

    This Treasure, can't be done justice, by human words,
    More beautiful, then any flower, with a song, that would shame any bird's.

    Worth dying a thousand death's, and I would do so with a smile,
    No road can keep me away, I will walk through lava for a mile.

    What deserves such High Esteem, Only one thing on this Earth,
    A life of Loneliness, Has Truly shown me

    "A True Woman's Worth"...

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    Naga commented on The most valuable possession

    08-05-2009

    Your word choices are good and the poem is very consistent. It contains that feeling of intense love and passion for someone you care deeply for; there is not enough of that sentiment in these times. Digressing, all in all I enjoyed it greatly.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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