The Man in me.

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    In life, we all have exspectations in what a Man should or shouldn't be. We grow-up and see our Fathers or Grandfathers doing all they can and those tend to be our roll-models. So, inturn this Poem was written in how I see myself. This is no ones exspectations! Simply put, I understand what I can do and what all I can Not. I am fine with those limitations.  

    The Man in me.




    I am a Man,
    Thats all I am.
    I do what I can,
    and understand what I Cain't..

    It's never easy in this you see!
    Men have weakness,
    And we all have strength's.
    Sum are outwardly,
    but many are deep in belief.

    I can play sports,
    I can chop wood and make forts.
    I can Flirt!
    Sing off key in church, oh Lord.

    I am only a man.
    I have callaced hands.
    I work the land.
    It's all I am!
    Just a simple but human imperfect man...  

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    Rhymer commented on The Man in me.

    10-14-2009

    You are a man with a lot of talent in your hands. Through verse we were able to capture the vision. The idea of man in your estimation
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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