"A Questionable Love"

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" Have you ever Loved and given all your Energy & Time and heart to someone and still at the end of every day. all you feel is emptieness and drained by what they have taken away?"  

"A Questionable Love"




I caint be what-all you wish me to be.
I can eat & breath!
I caint make enough money for you.
I can work and do what I have to do.
And, still I feel as if its never enough!

God, I feel so Lost!
This is Love?

I sat here and wish you away!
Dredding your voice and what you have to say!
Oh. I have contempt,
but its all spent-up..
I scream for peace and pray,
to God too releace my chains!

What Love is with-out Pain?
Is this Love?

Now you want more and I have nothing to give.
You spit slander on my face!
Still I hold back my Anger!
Go away I say Please just go.
Descraced & Shamed
Oh Pitty the Love I lost a long time ago.


  

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

Semo42’s Poems (9)

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