Saving the soul...

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I use too always feel as if God may not like me or better yet want me! I had been too church and saw the church its self as Hypocryticle, and political in regaurds too the numbers of those who made up the church its self! As i had a loss in 1999 of my Father, I wanted too find my way back or atleast seek some type of Peace with in my own self! Anyway this was my battle and struggle with not my belief but my inner Soul and outer body! This was in part how or what I felt as I began the understanding process of Church & God!

Saving the soul...

Who will save me?
I can do what I will.
I am Free too decide,
You see & I hide.

My fate is in my hands.
Still you cast such demands.
The rules of the land,
and not of man!

So, I ask you once again!
Who will save me?
I am not with-out sin.
Understanding my end.

I can go too church.
Learn too reherse my part.
Some worse and some good.
Define a True faithful heart.

I am begging you for help!
I am on my knees,
unable to remain stable,Please!
I cry at last.
My breath coldly whisper words,
Save me, Oh my God Save me!
Lower a ear, too hear my Plee!
God, My God it's me!

And for a second the world came silent!

In that momment of time.
The past and present in one of mine.
Feeling's of contempt and of shame.
I demanded and spoke only in vain!
I ran as fast as I could!
I am saved by grace and God!
       

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Semo42’s Poems (9)

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Saving the soul... 0
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