The Love of My Life

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    The Love of My Life

     Sitting here wondering what are you doing?
    Wishing i could see your beautiful face.
    Longing for the day when i can finally hold you,
    To kiss your precious face.
    To love you endlessly like i want to,
    Where no one tells us what to do.

    You my baby are the Love of My Life,
    You keep me sane,
    The love from you is so precious and true,
    I believe i found what i have been looking for in you.

    I long to touch your lovely skin,
    To run my fingers within your hair.
    To feel your warm embrace against me,
    You are the Love of My Life,
    It onlys seems appropriate for you to know it.

    I sit on the computer and wait for you,
    To see your face on your webcam.
    I cannot wait for my trip in October,
    To be able to hold you and kiss you,
    And so much more...
    To let you and everyone know lune...
    YOU ARE THE LOVE OF MY LIFE

    And always will be,
    Forever more!

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    Rendida commented on The Love of My Life

    08-19-2009

    wow it potrayes your love so eloquently...I love it wonderfully done
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    Milkman commented on The Love of My Life

    08-16-2009

    this is a nice piece for its sentiment, it conveys your desire and feelings well, but it doesnt illicite the readers envolvement, nothing sets it apart... it is just there...doesnt require the reader to think or emotionally invest in your words
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    Troubador commented on The Love of My Life

    08-13-2009

    It seems that you got the lock on the sugar department here so much so that your endless diatribe of love seems anticlimactic within the scope of your words. If I edited this piece I would end the line 5 with the word do. And change the next line to, Where no one can tell us what to do. That just seems to flow better. Also you should always capitalize the letter I when referring to yourself it is only proper. Other than those things that I have cited your poem is a beautiful declaration of your love though it is rather confusing as to whom you are referring to be it your child or your squeeze. Remember these comments are from a poetry editor not a judge of the passions that you hold.
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    tazwolf commented on The Love of My Life

    08-13-2009

    I liked it. Seeming deep with in yourself. It's not easy to put your insides out.
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    MrGee commented on The Love of My Life

    08-12-2009

    What a wonderful poem! such passsion and rhythmn. It reminds me of a poem i have written entitled Nefer I would love to have ur comments onmy poem nefer plz And of course this poem u wrote deserves a 10!
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