The Legacy of Dying

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    The Legacy of Dying

    From whence we endure the first whisper of life
    So, too, is the origin of our demise
    "Ashes to ashes, and dust unto dust"
    "For whom the bell tolls" is our object of lust.

    Death stands like a reaper at everyone's door
    Like a vulture awaiting that fate we abhor
    Then sweeping us up into comforting arms
    He delivers us with the most unwelcome charms.

    He lays us to rest wrapped in shrouds of his cape
    And delights in revealing his skeletal face
    The last sound we hear is his clattering teeth
    Yet we still must confess this is quite a relief.

    From the earth we have come, and therefore, shall return
    Let him lay us to rest so we, too, may sojourn
    In what manner shall each of us finally be placed
    When the soil and vermin are all we can taste?

    Do we slumber in vanity, display our worth
    Or suit ourselves up in unpretentious girth?
    Let us choose our death bed with precise expertise
    And delight in the fact that we shall Rest In Peace!

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    Hypothicus commented on The Legacy of Dying

    09-10-2009

    Very powerful use of words you have here! This is the first poem on here about death that wasn't entirely solemn and negative. You have a dual perspective and that I respect.

    wheelsal commented on The Legacy of Dying

    06-15-2009

    interesting to "choose our death bed"?. You are definably well read and have moments of genius. Keep writing.

    LadyVenom625

    08/21/2009

    Oh, good gracious! Thank you very much. I'm just happy to share them with people who who will appreciate them.

    vwelch commented on The Legacy of Dying

    06-07-2009

    Very engaging, I like it and you did really well with the use of words, Making things flow together. I really like how you took words that you don't see together often.

    FoF commented on The Legacy of Dying

    03-17-2009

    Does not have the rhythmic flow of your other work. After reading those - I think you could tighten this.

    LadyVenom625

    08/21/2009

    I was trying to keep the rhythm of "Twas The Night Before Christmas" Ut was not supposed to have the same 'flow'. This was actually a homework assignment in Composition class, we were supposed to either write a composition planning our funeral, or a poem. Being as how I have written so many, I chose the latter...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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