The Kill

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  • Emotional
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  • Death
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  • Life
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  • Loss
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  • Family

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    i lyke iit i put mehh emotiions intuhh this poem 
    tell mehh whtt yuhh think about it!

    The Kill

     The kill is that you're gone 
    The kill is that I need you
    The kill is me angry;nd sad
    All the emotions of pain; 
    I am fearless with you;but careless without you
    My heart feels like a black hole of darkness
    Tears fall from my eyes like heavy rain 
    The kill is that you are gone  
    The kill is that I need you
    The kill is that I'm cryinq
    But the thing that is most important is that... 
    I love you!

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    cmlestrade commented on The Kill

    08-31-2009

    This is excellent, a very emotional piece with a consistent repetitive rhythm. nice work keep them coming
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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