On My Front Porch Steps

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  • Happiness

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    this was made the day before i went back tuh skool
    hope yuhh lyke
    read;comment;rate;nd enjoy!

    On My Front Porch Steps

     As I sit on my front porch steps
    I watch the birds fly gracefully in the sky
    On my front porch steps I look at the people walk past...
    confidently
    When I'm on my front porch steps
    I watch as the sun fades
    &nd the moon comes out
    Sitting on my front porch steps I see...
    The Beautiful clouds movinq
    &nd enjoyinq mother nature while she beinqs tuh take
    her toll on the earth
    Me enterinq a happy mind
    as I am on my front porch steps
    when I'm there everythinq seems so peaceful
    &nd the next day after school
    I will sit...
    ON MY FRONT PORCH STEPS!

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    GentleT commented on On My Front Porch Steps

    09-19-2009

    A place where one can relax, think and enjoy is a good place to have. Nice job.
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    cmlestrade commented on On My Front Porch Steps

    09-05-2009

    Very compelling with a perfect picture for your poem. Good theme, good word choice, good read
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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